In the last class we have talked about the differences between public health and private health and I had to defend private health when I don’t agree with it.
First fall, I think that public health is the best because it has got the best equipment and the best doctors although they work in privates hospitals too.
On the other hand in the public health you must to wait a lot when you go for visiting and is difficult that you have a personality attention. I think they are things without importance because if you have a big problem or you have to do special tests you must to go to public health.
In the private health you have an individual room, personal attention and you don’t have to wait for visiting. Other advantage is that you’re pregnant you can do you more ultrasound that the normally and you have better attention for the doctors. But if you have a problem during your pregnant or your baby was born with a problem the private health send you to public health very quickly.
My mother had a problem in one of her breast four years ago and her gynaecologist of the private clinical said her that it wasn’t anything. The reason that my mother is still alive was that she went to public health all the time she considered. Finally, my mother had a hard cancer in one of her breast and the doctor had to remove it. If my mother wouldn’t’ had gone to the public health, nowadays she couldn’t be alive.
We are very grateful with public health because all the tests, that my mother did, were very quick and the doctors care her a lot.
Although there are a lot of things to change about public health, in my opinion and for my experiences I prefer it.
posted by lenxa @ 6:14 AM
2 Comments:
Hi lenxa,
I quite agree with you.
You explain very clear the main features and differences between public and private health.
Furthermore, when foreign people come here, they use to find our public health a very great system.
I'm glad the debate was interesting enough and that you were challenged to write this post. Good job!
Think about the following:
- privates hospitals (mistake # 4 from list)
- First fall (think of the real meaning of your sentence. Phonetically it resembles what you probably want to say, but it's spelled differently.)
- must to wait... must to go... (Most modals do not have "to" when accompanying an infinitive. Can you correct your mistakes?)
-Other advantage ("other" is plural. You probably mean "another", or else you would say: Other advantages are...
- your pregnant (you need the noun, not the verb here...)
Try to think and correct your mistakes. Ask me for if there is one you cannot solve, but you should be able to correct them!
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