I have got a sister and I'm older. Firstly, when I was born I was the first daughter, the first grandaughter and the first niece and I was very protect by all my family.
My parents have always said me that I was never jealous with my sister. I suppose the reason that I wasn´t jealous was that I often had relationships with other childrens. My parents joined with their friends that they had got childrens the same age as me. Moreover I was always very independient.
Although my parents were given us the same affect, my sister had always been very jealous with me . I don't know why.
I remember my parents said me that I had to care my sister because she was younger and I did it so
posted by lenxa @ 12:57 AM
1 Comments:
Good start!
Here are a few mistakes you should carefully look at them and correct:
You say:
-I was very protect by all my family.
-My parents have always said me
-I was never jealous with my sister
-childrens (twice!!! spell check, please!)
-independient (spell check, please!)
-my parents were given us the same affect
-my sister had always been very jealous with me
You should say:
-I was very protectED by all my family.
-My parents have always said TO me
-I was never jealous OF my sister
-children (twice!!! spell check, please!)
-independent (spell check, please!)
-my parents GAVE us the same affectION
-my sister had always been very jealous OF me
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